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lavastar ([identity profile] lavastar.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] alixtii 2009-07-18 09:09 pm (UTC)

The emotional pain and hurt they've inflicted on each other is so raw and vivid here, and the sexual attraction between them is messy and beautiful. The theme of wordlessness, while lovely, is a bit overstated at times—a little more variation or subtlety might have helped. And the phrase “sister” or “sister Slayers” was used way too frequently. But otherwise, fantastic job!

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