wisdomeagle: (teachercrush)
Ari (creature of dust, child of God) ([personal profile] wisdomeagle) wrote in [personal profile] alixtii 2006-08-15 02:14 am (UTC)

Awesome. I love commentaries.

It's a school, a science project, a weapons project, and, fundamentally, a harem, a place where female minds and bodies are appropriated and subjugated by men.

It's curious (to me) that you touch on this in several places -- the het male gaze is everywhere in your commentary -- but less on the ways that Fred qua Fred -- not as an agent of the Alliance -- uses River.


I find the teachercrush trope hard to evoke too, for the opposite reason.

I thought there was something else I wanted to say, but I have no idea what it was.

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