I'm afraid I can't find where the tense shift is. In general, statements which are true generally (e.g. Snyder dislikes reading) are in present tense, and specific events which took place as a particular moment in time are in past tense. But my eyes might just begliding over it without noticing it.
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Re: Feedback yet again!
Date: 2007-04-24 12:29 am (UTC)