Re: Feedback yet again!

Date: 2007-04-23 10:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sodzilla.livejournal.com
Minor addition: the change of tense from past to present and back again in the first part. Intentional or not? Just curious really, it didn't jar me that badly and it doesn't interfere with understanding of the fic.
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