"Surely, Holmes. . . ." is narration, not dialogue, so it's exempt in any case. And I especially wanted to make clear the conceit of POV character Moriarty addressing an interior monologue to Holmes (referred to as you throughout) as early as possible.
But yes, I couldn't not mention "Fucking cornfields"!
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Date: 2008-03-05 05:07 am (UTC)But yes, I couldn't not mention "Fucking cornfields"!