Playing with POV

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From a WiP:

When Cameron returns, it's in the truck, with John and there's a large mass in the back covered by a canvas which Riley assumes is the remains of the T-101, to be destroyed later.

Cameron pulls off Riley's shirt and examines the bullet wound, a couple inches to the right of Riley's navel.[Poll #1342612]

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Well I'm clearly brain dead, cos it just took me two readings to realise we are in Riley's POV, so I go with right hip. On first reading I didn't notice the 'Riley assumes' line so I thought we were in Cameron's POV. Of course in a real fic this wouldn't be an issue since POV would have been obvious for ages.