Wow, great job. I usually don't care for fic with non-canon romantic/sexual pairings, but you did terrific work on this one. Everything builds very well, and I really like the way Cameron and Riley play off each other. You've really got everybody's voices and perspectives down. Solid, strong, nicely done. Very good fic.
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Date: 2009-03-18 03:10 am (UTC)