Finally here after you linked me to this, and I really enjoyed it. You captured Dawn's state and situation so well, how she wants to prove herself and prove she is herseelf, her uncertain position as Key and adolescent girl very nicely captured. If anything, I was left wanting more - more of her interacting with Wesley and Fred (revisiting post-Pylea Fred totally highlights the River similarities). Of course in LA she wouldn't be 'little Dawnie'. I'm glad she got this adventure!
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Date: 2007-03-13 08:14 pm (UTC)