alixtii: Summer pulling off the strap to her dress, in a very glitzy and model-y image. (River)
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Book & River, 311 words.

Through the Black, She Shines

The light shines in the darkness, but the darkness has not understood it. (John 1:5, NIV, unalt)

There was a reason that they called space the black. One oft felt alone in the dark, cut off from both man and God. It was not difficult for Book to believe that it could drive a man crazy, cause him to abandon his own humanity. Reavers were merely the logical endpoint of a life without God.

At night, when everyone else was asleep, he liked to come to the bridge and stare out at the vastness of God’s creation. Through the vast darkness of space, every once and a while a star’s light broke through, a visible sign of God’s love for humankind.

“It doesn’t understand,” a voice broke in.

Years of reflexes took over, and Book spun around, automatically reaching for the weapon he no longer wore. “River,” he said, kindly, when he saw the young girl, standing at the top of the stairs which led to the bridge. He made a gesture to welcome her in with him. “You startled me, child. I didn’t hear you come up.”

“It doesn’t understand,” River repeated. “The darkness. It has not understood it.”

“Understood what?” Book asked quietly. There was meaning behind her madness, that he was sure of. She was not the first one to speak in riddles, after all.

“The charm dissolves apace,” River said, sitting down in the copilot’s chair and looking up at the stars. “And as the morning steals upon the night, melting the darkness, so their rising senses begin to chase the ignorant fumes that mantle their clearer reason.”[*]

Even the Teacher himself would sometimes explain his parables, even if only for his most trusted disciples. Book was neither Joseph nor Daniel, able to interpret the dreams of kings. River’s ramblings, whatever they might mean, would require a far more skilled interpreter than he.

River smiled. “Doesn’t matter,” she said. “The light shines anyway.”

[*] The Tempest V.i.72-76

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Date: 2005-12-03 04:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] echo-of-my-soul.livejournal.com
I enjoyed this so much. It's very compelling, as is often the case in fiction where River is well-written. I love the interaction between her and Book.

I think what is the most amazing about this piece is that in so few words, the sense of that vastness, that openness, is captured and felt so keenly. I almost felt myself as if I were floating out there. I love River's way of interweaving the aspects of light and dark.

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Date: 2005-12-03 01:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alixtii.livejournal.com
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Date: 2005-12-03 05:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cadence-k.livejournal.com
This is just incredible. You captured River so incredibly well. And Book!

I loved this! Saving to my memories because... wow...

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Date: 2005-12-03 01:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alixtii.livejournal.com
Why, thank you!

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Date: 2005-12-03 06:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gonzo21.livejournal.com
Very pretty fic.

And I think your icon has killed me dead.

Dead, I say. Dead.

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Date: 2005-12-03 06:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alixtii.livejournal.com
Thanks!

I was wondering when/if anyone would comment on the icon. I enjoy it muchly.

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Date: 2005-12-03 06:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honorh.livejournal.com
Very beautiful. You've captured Book's devotion beautifully, as well as River's random brilliance. Thank you.

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Date: 2005-12-03 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alixtii.livejournal.com
You're very welcome! I'm glad you liked it!

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Date: 2005-12-03 09:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] invisionary.livejournal.com
Very nice. Insightful, especially for being so short.

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Date: 2005-12-03 09:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alixtii.livejournal.com
Thank you!

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Date: 2005-12-04 01:09 am (UTC)
wisdomeagle: (River)
From: [personal profile] wisdomeagle
She was not the first one to speak in riddles, after all.

*Oh*. This was really great! Thanks so much! The River voice was awesome. :)

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Date: 2005-12-04 01:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alixtii.livejournal.com
Everybody keeps on complimenting my River voice here, I feel bad. It's mostly the NIV and Shakespeare put together. She says about a single line that's actually mine.

But in any case, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for the prompt!

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Date: 2005-12-04 02:57 am (UTC)
inalasahl: (shiny)
From: [personal profile] inalasahl
I liked that very much.

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Date: 2005-12-04 03:00 am (UTC)

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Date: 2006-09-24 08:27 pm (UTC)
anonymous_sibyl: Red plums in a blue bowl on which it says "this is just to say." (Anne Sexton--elbow on knee)
From: [personal profile] anonymous_sibyl
This was lovely. It was beautiful Book and beautiful River, but this--“It doesn’t understand,” River repeated. “The darkness. It has not understood it.”--well, that was just everything, wasn't it? That's the entire series right there, it's all of them.

I am really glad you did that feedback meme, because I did miss your stuff and I'm not so sure I would have thought to go searching back through my flist's memories to look for fic from the past.

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Date: 2006-09-30 12:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alixtii.livejournal.com
I'm glad it worked for you, and that you enjoyed the fic you stumbled upon!

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Date: 2007-12-03 07:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] youngest-one.livejournal.com
Very nice. I love fic which explores Book's thoughts, and this did the job very well.

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Date: 2007-12-03 11:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alixtii.livejournal.com
Thank you!

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Date: 2008-01-15 11:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaylith.livejournal.com
Better late than never...

I really like the way you captured both characters. This was lovely. Thank you!

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Date: 2008-01-16 01:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alixtii.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it.

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